Loved this one Ana! I could feel my irritation towards Mrs Aida Elm rise with every passing word, well done. So cool to see this jump into fiction from you, can't wait to see what you do next.
"Yes, that Dr Getwell had avoided her thus far was no miracle, but she was grateful regardless of the reasons" - Loved a few sentences, this one the most. Very good piece!
Love this one.
Loved this one Ana! I could feel my irritation towards Mrs Aida Elm rise with every passing word, well done. So cool to see this jump into fiction from you, can't wait to see what you do next.
Great story. I’m left relieved for the widower and wondering how many times I’ve unknowingly been the butcher
Great read, thanks!
"Yes, that Dr Getwell had avoided her thus far was no miracle, but she was grateful regardless of the reasons" - Loved a few sentences, this one the most. Very good piece!
Poor Mrs. Aida Elm mwahahaha. Brilliant.
What a great story! Now I just want more. (Also, the painting here is an accurate depiction of my household around dinner time.)