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Nick Buchheit's avatar

This reminded of some great Ray Bradbury shorts in The Illustrated Man. I would dare say even better than some of those. Fantastic work and well done!

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Minna's avatar

Can I just frame your comment? You made my day, week and month (at least!) Ray Bradbury in the same sentence as my writings. Thank you for taking the time to write a comment. It brought me genuine joy!

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Nick Buchheit's avatar

Of course! Glad to hear it made your day.

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A.C. Cargill, All-Human Author's avatar

Similar to other stories. But presented uniquely.

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Minna's avatar

Thank you, A.C.! Much appreciated!

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Joel D. Aguilar Ramírez's avatar

Great story, it reminds me of Asimov and his Robot dreams and I am Robot. I win be coming back for more stories.

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Minna's avatar

Thank you, Joel! What a nice compliment. I have more stories on my Substack.

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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

I second the Ray Bradbury reference. This was awesome.

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Minna's avatar

Thank you, Michael, for your kind words!

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BowTiedErudite's avatar

Loved it, and the references to Jack Vance’s work are the icing on the cake

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Minna's avatar

Thank you for your kind words! It means a lot to me. Jack Vance was a superb wordsmith and I adore his Cugel stories.

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